Nice ...
I can see the idea, but think it would be more effective if the hand had been lower in the frame.
agree with friiskiwi.
this is wonderful. it's clear, and simple, and gorgeous.
The hand should be lower. Nice shot.
this is the most poignant of all the shots would like to see a retake with others suggestions and will leave a vote until then. As making those adjustments should result in a higher score which this idea is well deserving of