Successful case:Offer from Carn

    日期:2018-08-17 / 人气: / 来源:未知

    College Admissions Consulting Success Story: Offer from Carnegie Mellon University

    What made admission letter of Carnegie Mellon University in such a great demand?
    Carnegie Mellon University, one of the top-ranking universities, has an extremely low acceptance rate which is declining while the number of students applied is increasing every year. The School of Computer Science of Carnegie Mellon University is the most prestigious department in the United States. It is also the largest School of Computer Science both in the US and around the world. Most of its graduates have become industry elites. The IT giants of the Fortune Global 500 companies have donated money and set up research institutes at Carnegie Mellon University, and Carnegie Mellon University's tuition fees from students are only a very small part of their total annual income. It is precisely for these reasons that Carnegie Mellon University has high requirements for students around the world to be admitted.
    Basic information of the student:
    Currently enrolled in: Chinese university
    GPA: 3.9
    TOEFL: 104
    GRE: 329+3.5
    Got admitted into: Master of Science in Artificial Intelligence and Innovation (MSAI) in the School of Computer Science at Carnegie Mellon University
    Success story of W(alias):
    In fact, W's TOEFL score is not very high compared to the overall Chinese students. For those who want to get offer from top universities, the personal statement must have a flashpoint to attract admission officers. Before starting her application, our team did a "brainstorming" with W and her parents to excavate the student’s strengths and professional background as deeply as possible. At the same time, we also took a look at the paper written by W from before, and we realized that there is not enough professionalism in terms of the use of words, and the language of the personal statement is too flat and direct. We have put a lot of effort to provide suggestions regarding the basic structure of the essay, combining the students' research interests with the professional characteristics of the school. America Offer Education would love to give credit to the student and parents for their long-term trust since achieving such outstanding result requires mutual support. Studying abroad is far more difficult than we thought. In order to make fewer roundabouts, or you don't have enough experience, or you simply need some professional advice, you can drop by America Offer Education anytime. We provide feedback to all the students and parents with assistance in their application process. 


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